June 1, 2005
no title (yet)
He eased away from the rowdy group and slumped down on the bay walls. Oblivious to the noisy crowd behind him, he drew his knees up to his chin, his soulful eyes intent on the sinking sun.
A consoling arm fell over his shoulders, the hug he would have cherished. They sat together, each seeking comfort in the other’s presence, and finding it.
**afterword: this is a little literary experiment i've been trying the past few days. saw it on some other blog, and thought i'd try to adopt the idea myself. it's free to interpretation and open to suggestion. please tell me what you think. it may seem vague, but that's part of the style, i think.**
Posted by no_brainer on June 1, 2005 at 08:24 AM | 7 comments
Rex Nerdoviae (guest)
blossom_017
Sacha Chua (guest)
You might want to check out this <a href="http://groups.yahoo.com/group/flashxer">flash fiction exercise Yahoogroup</a> I'm on--it's a great source of writing prompts and critiques. Have fun!
no_brainer
haha, todo vague na nga eh para wala nang isyu-isyu dito. or baka lalo pa nga dahil vague. purely fictional, promise. wahaha. :-D
nung nakita ko ung mga ganitong fiction somewhere, naisip ko nga, hindi talaga ata ako meant for longer forms of writing. mahirap magmaintain ng quality. baka eto na talaga para sa akin. short but very, annoyingly sweet. :-P
orion21
mixlits (guest)
on a more serious note... magaling. pero you probably already knew that. "the literary genius of no brainer"? tss. vain! :p
Cinderojo