Wonder

The rain fell in torrents, but the bedroom window met it full force. Innocent eyes sparkled at the sight; lanky fingers spelled out words and traced landscapes on the frosted glass. Somewhere below,  cheering ensued as lights clicked back on.

She knocked on the doorsill. "Come back downstairs, the electricity's back on."

"Thanks Mom," he turned around, grinning, "but I'm fine right here."

**afterword: since my first one got good props, here's another one. it's not one with romantic undertones though, i'm gonna try and see if it still holds the same effect, or if i should stick to lovey-dovey shorts. they're supposed to stir emotions, or basically make you feel warm inside. haha. comments are being begged for, and please refer to my previous entry if you haven't yet.

oh yeah, try to find what's similar with the two entries. a sort of "theme" i've been sticking to for all the ones i've made.**

Currently feeling: vain (lol)
Posted by no_brainer on June 1, 2005 at 10:14 PM | 3 comments
Comment posted on June 13th, 2005 at 10:48 PM
Nice ha.. Miss you na!
Comment posted on June 13th, 2005 at 08:35 AM
Naks! Naka-relate ako sa entry na 'to... I like it when it's raining and I'm at home, because it gives a lot of time to think (and sleep!)... which is really hard for me to get these days that I consider it as a luxury. :-)
Comment posted on June 3rd, 2005 at 09:58 PM
it's nice.:) as for "theme"... well, i don't know. for me, in both stories, there's this feeling of... umm... finding contentment in a moment. :)
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